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This tutorial covers some techniques that involve using embedded passages in conjunction with variables to create story systems. Embedding & variables are powerful tools for organizing your stories, allowing you to group related features together into passages and re-use those passages across your story. This tutorial covers two techniques; using variable links in embedded passages, and using variables to control which passage the host passage embeds.

This tutorial references concepts from the Embedding Passages, Variable Basics, and Modifying Variables tutorials. Consider checking those out if you get stuck in the material below!

Embedded Passage Variables

Just like all other text elements in a passage, you can use variables to replace the embedded passage name in your embed passage element within a host passage. Using variables to have the computer "choose" between several different embedded passages allows you to create very dynamic stories which respond to events across passages. These sorts of stories can be complex--here's an example.

Check out the story below: the bonfire passage describes a bonfire. Using variables and embedded passages, I can make it so the bonfire "burns down" as the user spends time "away" from the bonfire passage.

First, I'll create the intro passage that sets up the variables, and then the bonfire passage with the bonfire and a link to another passage. Click through the tabs below to see the content of each passage:

fire: 'Roaring'
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> [[Start the Story->bonfire]]

You come across a campsite. In the center of the clearing, you see a place for a fire.

{embed passage: fire}

> [[Search for Food->search]]

Nothing here yet!

You can see in the passages above that I've created a variable called fire. This variable will be the name of a passage containing a description of the fire. In future passages, I'll have the computer modify the variable to point to different passages, thereby replacing the embedded passage at different points in the story. Before I move any further, I'll create two different passages with descriptions of the bonfire: roaring and dying. I'm also going to add content to the search passage from before. Click through the tabs to check out each passage:

fire: 'Dying'
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You spend some time picking through the underbrush. You find a raspberry briar, and collect some berries to eat by the fire.

> [[Return to the Fire->bonfire]]

The fire is roaring, licking the stones placed around the logs. You can feel the heat tickling your face and hands, even from across the clearing.

The fire sputters, sending sparks and ash into the air. A trail of white smoke filters through the branches overhead.

The search passage now modifies the variable called fire, changing its value to Dying. Now, when the reader returns to the fire, the bonfire passage will reference the passage called dying rather than the passage called roaring. This will emphasize the time the reader has "spent" collecting berries nearby. Here's the story map with all of the links in place:

The Twine editor, showing the passages described above

fire: 'Roaring'
--

> [[Start the Story->bonfire]]

You come across a campsite. In the center of the clearing, you see a place for a fire.

{embed passage: fire}

> [[Search for Food->search]]

fire: 'Dying'
--

You spend some time picking through the underbrush. You find a raspberry briar, and collect some berries to eat by the fire.

> [[Return to the Fire->bonfire]]

The fire is roaring, licking the stones placed around the logs. You can feel the heat tickling your face and hands, even from across the clearing.

The fire sputters, sending sparks and ash into the air. A trail of white smoke filters through the branches overhead.

Try out the story for yourself by clicking here. There are lots of other creative ways to control embedded passages with variables--feel free to experiment!

Embedding & Variable Links

If you've read the Embedding Passages tutorial, you can start combining these concepts to create powerful systems that work together. For example, consider the story based on Edgar Allen Poe's The Raven from the embedding tutorial:

A Twine story editor with three passages: stanza1 is connected to stanza2, and both stanzas are connected to a passage called raven via dotted lines

In this story, I've embedded the passage named raven into all of the stanza passages. Each stanza passage has a link to the next part of the poem, allowing the reader to progress through the poem step-by-step. Here's the Stanza1 passage as an example:

Then, methought, the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
Swung by Seraphim whose foot-falls tinkled on the tufted floor.
“Wretch,” I cried, “thy God hath lent thee—by these angels he hath sent thee
Respite—respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Lenore;
Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe and forget this lost Lenore!”

{embed passage: 'raven'}

> [[Next->stanza2]]

Quoth the Raven: "Nevermore".

Because the structure of the story is so consistent, I can change things up slightly and simplify the passages, moving the link into the raven passage. The first step is to add a variable to each Stanza passage, whose value is the name of the passage the Stanza should link to:

next: 'stanza2'
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Then, methought, the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
Swung by Seraphim whose foot-falls tinkled on the tufted floor.
“Wretch,” I cried, “thy God hath lent thee—by these angels he hath sent thee
Respite—respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Lenore;
Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe and forget this lost Lenore!”

{embed passage: 'raven'}

> [[Next->{next}]]

Nothing here, for now

Quoth the Raven: "Nevermore".

You can see above that I've inserted the value of the next variable into the link, just like I did in the Goldilocks example in the Linking with Variables tutorial. Now, I can move remove the link from stanza1 and add it to the raven passage (remember: all passages have access to the variables):

Quoth the Raven "Nevermore".

> [[Next->{next}]]

next: 'stanza2'
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Then, methought, the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
Swung by Seraphim whose foot-falls tinkled on the tufted floor.
“Wretch,” I cried, “thy God hath lent thee—by these angels he hath sent thee
Respite—respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Lenore;
Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe and forget this lost Lenore!”

{embed passage: 'raven'}

next: "stanza1"
--

Nothing here, for now

{embed passage: 'raven'}

Because the raven passage is responsible for the link, I can add all sorts of fancy features to make the embedded material more dramatic:

Quoth the Raven...

[after 5 seconds]
[["Nevermore". -> {next}]]

next: 'stanza2'
--

Then, methought, the air grew denser, perfumed from an unseen censer
Swung by Seraphim whose foot-falls tinkled on the tufted floor.
“Wretch,” I cried, “thy God hath lent thee—by these angels he hath sent thee
Respite—respite and nepenthe from thy memories of Lenore;
Quaff, oh quaff this kind nepenthe and forget this lost Lenore!”

{embed passage: 'raven'}

next: "stanza1"
--

Nothing here, for now

{embed passage: 'raven'}

You can try out the new version of The Raven by clicking here. If you'd like to download it and play around with it in the Twine editor, click here. There are lots of other creative ways to use variables and links--don't be afraid to experiment!

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